1. Read the letter and then comment on how readable you found the letter. Briefly analyze the factors which influenced your ability to easily read the letter.
2. Calculate a Fog Index for the document's first paragraph.
3. Calculate the average number of words coming before the subject of the sentences in paragraph 1.
4. Calculate the average number of words coming between the subject and verb of the sentences in paragraph 1.
5. Calculate the percentage of linking verbs used in paragraph 1.
6. Restructure paragraph 1 into two readable paragraphs. Then, edit the phrasing in those paragraphs to make the phrasing simpler and more direct (without changing the writer's apparent meaning). Also, repair unclear sentence structures.

January 17, 2002

Mr. Gary McCord
Power Research Center
1002 Oak Bay Boulevard
Palo Alto, California 94406

Dear Mr. McCord:

MidWest Power Corporation is currently performing a market search for an optimal generator maintenance scheduling program. This program is to be capable of producing optimum generator maintenance schedules for our generation planning department (planning horizon of 10 to 20 years) and our operations planning department (planning horizon of 1 to 5 years). If PRC has, in their current inventory of planning software, a program(s) of this general description it would be greatly appreciated if you could forward information concerning this program to us. The information concerning this program could include: intended planning horizon, monetary compensation for the program, host CPU, source language, objective function, input requirements, etc. A number of papers are recorded in the literature which address this subject but to-date we are unaware of any commercially available programs of a directly relevant nature. The MidWest Power Corporation is actively seeking to locate a program which will produce optimum generator maintenance schedules (minimum risk or production cost).

We would greatly appreciate any help you could provide in locating such a program.

Yours truly,

Winston St. Cloud
Planning Engineer, System & Development Planning